My First Writing 2 Months Ago :D

This is my first writing in TEST ENGLISH SCHOOL 2 months ago. Actually, this writing so bad! why? there is no GERUND and also PASSIVE VOICE, hahaha very flat. But no problem, i will always try to improve my skills for the next. Check it dot, I post it without fixing or adding something, I have to be honest to the readers. ^^

SOCIAL NETWORK

One of necessary many people in this world is social network. At the present, social network like utility that is used by everyone including children until old person. Social network is instrument of comunication, symbolic culture and also system in society which has positive and negative impact. This essay will describe about positive and negative impact of social network.

Firstly, before many people know social network including Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, Path, Line, Whatsapp and Blackberry Messenger, they are communicate hardly with their friend or their family. Many people has not instrument to communicate, so when they make decision to meet with their friend, it is imposible postpone their agreement reached. But, after many people start to know social network and smartphone, everyone connected with many people and get information about everything easyly. Social network help everyone to promote some product such as online shop and also student in school from elementary school until senior high school get knowledge about their lesson by internet access such google. Therefore, social media has many postitive impact.

Secondly, there are many negative impact of social media. Actually, social network has either positive or negative impact. Formerly, many people seldom used social network because just rich people who capable bought handphone. That time, society very respect to harmony and they are very care but at the time, there are many naughty children, dishonesty, degradation, backbiting, deception, pornography because of social network. In school, before many people know social network, all students are very appreciating the lesson because they get lesson subtance hardly because they must visit the library to get some book, but that time many student have not appreciate knowledge and they are very dilligent to expose about their feeling in social network. Consequently, social network makes society to change naturalism culture and influences moralism everyone.

Briefly, in globalisation period, there are many negative impact of social network than positive impact, specially young people, so society should wise when they use social network and always productive in life.